Post by Teri on Sept 9, 2006 17:36:37 GMT -5
The New CMO: Bones
By Teri
New CMO Challenge - 425 word short story. - This is probably more
of a draft so if anyone has any suggestion for improvement, please
let me know. - Thanks!
Rated PG for repeated use of the word d**n.
* * * * *
Carter and O'Neill were walking towards the infirmary.
"So where did the General find this new guy again? He's a riot." He
asked referring to the new doctor.
"He didn't, Sir, he just showed up through the gate. He said
something about d**n Vulcan memories and something about velocity to
sling-shot around the sun. Apparently, he is from the future. The
General sent him to the base infirmary for a check-up and he sort of
just took over."
"And the General is trusting him? With a story like that?"
"Yeah," she shrugged it surprised her too. "He just said something
about SG-1 not the only people who can manage time travel, sir, and
something about his aunt, Edith Keeler."
The two Air Force officers entered the infirmary and approached the
new Doctor.
"So, what's up Doc?" Jack drawled, "what can you tell me about the
dead snake we brought in?"
"d**n It, Colonel. I'm a Doctor not a zoologist!"
Jack gave the new Doctor a look before turning away from him
motioning a time-out. Everyone but Jack froze and he looked directly
at the readers, "Like there was anyone of you not expecting that
line." He gave an incredulous look that was pure Jack O'Neill before
turning back around and motioning for a time-in.
Jack just gave him a look as he shook his head with a small grin he
was trying to hide. He wasn't Janet, but the new Doc would sure keep
the place on their toes.
"Just look at this, a drill for a man's head. What is this the Dark
Ages? At least nothing here is going to scramble my d**n molecules."
Carter grinned this time. "Actually, sir, the gate works by
dissembling your molecules into energy patterns for transportation.
If you stay, you will be required to use the gate at some point.
The doctor just shot her a look.
Carter ignored the look and continued. "Actually, I have been
working on a way to create the same effect outside of the Gate
environment. I have had some luck with it so far. It will allow
us to beam energy patterns much in the way Thor does, Colonel. I
just haven't gotten the pattern buffers quite right yet. I can see a
lot of applications for my Transporter Beam."
It was here that Doctor Leonard McCoy of the United Federation of
planets realized why this Major seemed so familiar. This was the
famous Carter who invented transporters. At least she hadn't said it
was 'Fascinating' like a certain green blooded Vulcan he knew.
"It really is Fascinating, sir."
* * * * *
So, what do you all think?
Teri 9/29/04
By the way, none of these characters are mine as if you didn't know
that.
By Teri
New CMO Challenge - 425 word short story. - This is probably more
of a draft so if anyone has any suggestion for improvement, please
let me know. - Thanks!
Rated PG for repeated use of the word d**n.
* * * * *
Carter and O'Neill were walking towards the infirmary.
"So where did the General find this new guy again? He's a riot." He
asked referring to the new doctor.
"He didn't, Sir, he just showed up through the gate. He said
something about d**n Vulcan memories and something about velocity to
sling-shot around the sun. Apparently, he is from the future. The
General sent him to the base infirmary for a check-up and he sort of
just took over."
"And the General is trusting him? With a story like that?"
"Yeah," she shrugged it surprised her too. "He just said something
about SG-1 not the only people who can manage time travel, sir, and
something about his aunt, Edith Keeler."
The two Air Force officers entered the infirmary and approached the
new Doctor.
"So, what's up Doc?" Jack drawled, "what can you tell me about the
dead snake we brought in?"
"d**n It, Colonel. I'm a Doctor not a zoologist!"
Jack gave the new Doctor a look before turning away from him
motioning a time-out. Everyone but Jack froze and he looked directly
at the readers, "Like there was anyone of you not expecting that
line." He gave an incredulous look that was pure Jack O'Neill before
turning back around and motioning for a time-in.
Jack just gave him a look as he shook his head with a small grin he
was trying to hide. He wasn't Janet, but the new Doc would sure keep
the place on their toes.
"Just look at this, a drill for a man's head. What is this the Dark
Ages? At least nothing here is going to scramble my d**n molecules."
Carter grinned this time. "Actually, sir, the gate works by
dissembling your molecules into energy patterns for transportation.
If you stay, you will be required to use the gate at some point.
The doctor just shot her a look.
Carter ignored the look and continued. "Actually, I have been
working on a way to create the same effect outside of the Gate
environment. I have had some luck with it so far. It will allow
us to beam energy patterns much in the way Thor does, Colonel. I
just haven't gotten the pattern buffers quite right yet. I can see a
lot of applications for my Transporter Beam."
It was here that Doctor Leonard McCoy of the United Federation of
planets realized why this Major seemed so familiar. This was the
famous Carter who invented transporters. At least she hadn't said it
was 'Fascinating' like a certain green blooded Vulcan he knew.
"It really is Fascinating, sir."
* * * * *
So, what do you all think?
Teri 9/29/04
By the way, none of these characters are mine as if you didn't know
that.